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Friday, 24 July 2020

hokitika beach river and gorge

  
My favourite holiday destination is Hokitika. Hokitika has nice holiday homes and holiday homes are right by the beach and it has got nice views of the sunset. After 
watching the sunset I went to the beach and had a swim with my older brother.

Hokitika Beach is kind of nice only in the morning. Hokitika Gorge is a really 
nce gorge. Hokitika Gorge is the nicest gorge in Hokitika. The river in Hokitika
has got lots of wild life and I had the nicest swim ever there.




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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 July 2020 at 14:47

    Hola Xavier it jaye


    It's cool how you add the name of the river because if you didnt no one would know what you were talking about . One of my uncles went there and he said it was so beautiful.. My feedback for you is my not to copy and paste the words from your slide into your blurb.

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  2. Anonymous27 July 2020 at 10:02

    Hi Xavier. That sound so amazing! Your post just made me want to go down to Hokitika (in the holiday). Just saying, but can you fix up the punctuation?
    By Kyuss

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